- edit each paragraph one by one so it follows a structure that is easy to understand
- cut down the paragraphs sos they are smaller and address one point or max two points
- apply historiographical issues to my essay to address the main four questions
- look at past projects to see what else should be included
- check footnotes and references
- after this i will hand it into mr wright so get feedback (this will be on Thursday )
- then i will apply the feedback to my essay edit it again
my synopsis an devaluation will be completed early holidays to be checked on Tuesday next week
however i am unsure about my third source to evaluate. i have already got bury my heart though that will be short as its evaluation is mainly my essay anyway. then i have Peter Farb's 'indian corn' review which covered a lot of historiographical issues relating to conducting native mercian history. all my other sources are very short reviews or websites that provided me with background information or is too little to evaluation fully in this section. there is the encyclopaedia though i am no sure if it is appropriate to evaluate.
my essay is coming along though there are many areas i need to edit.
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